Feedback From episode 2

Peer feedback
A couple of interesting shots
Strange narrative, cannot understand it (7 People mentioned this)
Cuts well
Characters work well
Sound levels are high & low (5 people mentioned this)
Taster bit / preview works well (3 people mentioned this)
Too much in one content in one episode (2 people mentioned this)
Good angles used
Jumps too much
Pointless shots used
Confusing genre (comedy or drama?)
Acting is not very good, could be better
Spy could of been done better, e.g appears in the room like is the skeleton
Silent moments ned sorting out
Need quicker cuts
Continuity works well
'Jaws' sound / music cuts in too suddenly & drops out to early



Teacher feedback (Pete)
Continuity with previous episode (costume, scripting) works well
Elliot's character has been developed well
Use of jaws music?
Suddenly goes silent
Much better editing than the 1st episode
Add footage, where it goes black / silent?
Like the taster for episode 3 at the end

Here is feedback that we had recieved from everyone in our class including ourselves and our teacher Pete.

Again people mentioned about the sound levels being a bit off. The main point that came up was that people are finding it hard to understand what is going on with the whole storyline. I think next time we need to try and think up of a better script, people had mentioned this about the first episode. The sound levels again are off, some ar elow some are high, need to always change the volume level of the computer/laptop to be able to enjoy the video.
People had said that the preview of the next episode was really good, and it helped them try to understand what is going to happen next